Second draft submitted on 26th August for feedback.   Mr. Mathew sir looked through the articles- praised the design, colour, overall structure of second draft of newsletter.  He pointed two corrections- In Bodh gaya workshop article, use BPL survey instead of socio-economic survey 2. Avoid using adjectives. (13th Sept.)  He said that he also would go through the full content later.
Follow up was done with Mr. Mathew sir for feedback on 13th Sept., 16th Sept., 19th Sept. and 20th Sept.)   
Received detailed content feedback from Siddarth sir (9th Sept.).   Received feedback (praised the second draft) from Anindita (2nd Sept.).
Received detailed content feedback from Siddarth sir (9th Sept.).   Received feedback (praised the second draft) from Anindita (2nd Sept.).                                                 Received detailed content feedback from Siddarth sir (9th Sept.).   Received feedback (praised the second draft) from Anindita (2nd Sept.).